tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post8136839510379632827..comments2023-10-16T03:53:30.338-06:00Comments on The Cosmic Word Laboratory : Out on a Limbcosmos camihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-58874653835172030192015-03-29T23:21:43.070-06:002015-03-29T23:21:43.070-06:00cool ~cool ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-14088716430432264732015-03-27T12:51:01.482-06:002015-03-27T12:51:01.482-06:00I love your unique phrasing and the role of the tr...I love your unique phrasing and the role of the tree. Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-4284930381097305152015-03-27T08:13:30.129-06:002015-03-27T08:13:30.129-06:00*It*
sorry :-)*It*<br /><br />sorry :-)Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-27462708988673435062015-03-27T08:13:14.432-06:002015-03-27T08:13:14.432-06:00I does sound quite perfect to me.I does sound quite perfect to me.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-12844110651183217672015-03-27T06:09:53.538-06:002015-03-27T06:09:53.538-06:00Such a feel good, comforting sort of poem. I used ...Such a feel good, comforting sort of poem. I used to read in a huge cherry tree. Sweet memories.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-57888619012099118972015-03-27T03:00:02.611-06:002015-03-27T03:00:02.611-06:00I'm sorry, but the word 'banana' alway...I'm sorry, but the word 'banana' always makes me smile and think of minions these days... And suddenly the 'I' in the poem turned into a minion and the whole thing just made me laugh. For me, any poetry that evokes an emotional response is good poetry, and even though I probably didn't have the reaction you intended (and again, I'm sorry about that) this piece did elicit an emotional response. Before the minions got in the way I really enjoyed the line about how the scent of the breeze changes colour. That is inspirational! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-81320158491022479742015-03-26T23:34:59.827-06:002015-03-26T23:34:59.827-06:00You pulled me back into childhood.. I would love t...You pulled me back into childhood.. I would love to have a climbing tree again.. But I guess I could never climb it the way I once did,brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-48858791419496261642015-03-26T22:58:53.641-06:002015-03-26T22:58:53.641-06:00This place, the perfect place, is described as per...This place, the perfect place, is described as perfectly as any I've read. I love the fact that you could conjure up this gem from this little prompt. It is as large as the love of parent or a sibling with the personal space that envelopes and hold us tight enough to remember the things that only the one experiencing can appreciate. Loved this writing and thank you for playing.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3390940012478266015.post-85792909513149792452015-03-26T17:35:44.271-06:002015-03-26T17:35:44.271-06:00"the scent on the breeze"
"thick, p..."the scent on the breeze"<br />"thick, pliant arms"<br />"My perfect."<br />Gosh.<br />Everything is safe and as it should be on this limb!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.com